forcing

..........

who are you?

i am ever blue

without you

are your lies true?

see its choppy and no emotions are attached to it its free of anything that would really capture someones attention. now look at it again without anything forced.

i see a stranger in the doorway

a lier in the halls

you left me here to die alone

with nothing but your lies to feed me

did you see?

the tears in my eyes 

as i saw through your disguise 

leaving scars upon my soul

and now i'm here

looking back on those days

when you were near

but it was never true

those days with you

those times of joy

those promises you made

it was never true

sounds better right? its about the same thing the first was, but this one has emotion to it and thus is easier to relate to because its real. only write what you truly feal. when you feal it, and exactly how you feel it. poetry is emotion cut it off and you will take it soul away