Lesson 2: NO RUN-ON SENTENCES!A Lesson by Brandon PeralesRun-on sentences ruin the interest of a literature work.I know you want to jam everything in into a sentence, but DON'T DO IT! You don't want your reader to be out of breath and confuse them with run-on sentences. PREVENT: "I walked down the street and I got hit by a car, the driver drove off, so I had to walk home with a limp, and it hurt a lot when I walked." HOW IT SHOULD BE: "I walked down the street and got hit by a car. The driver drove off, so I had to walk home with a limp. It hurt a lot when I walked." Comments |
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AuthorBrandon PeralesLos Angeles, CAAbout1995: I was born. 2008: I got into writing and started to write everything I went through when my sister left to the military. 2009: I wanted to be a novelist. 2010: I gave up writing mainly becaus.. |