Section 1: Dialog

Section 1: Dialog

A Lesson by ericdeben
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"You have a problem with your dialog"

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Working on it

"Your dialog isn't natural"
 Natural Dialog 
"You use 'said' too much"
 Replacing "said"
"You need actions with your dialog"
 Dialog Interrupters
"That isn't like your character(s) to talk like that"
 Dialect & Continuity 




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Editing With Constructive Criticism


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I'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..
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