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Third chapter of "The Legend"

A revised copy of The Old World, now titled Valhalla. Please any critique is welcomed.

Three brothers change from good to evil, based on Norse mythology. Trying to get feedback on what I can do to improve it.

Revised form of Chapter 1- the old world, now titled Valhalla. please any critique is welcomed

Chapter 2--The grove “Brothers today marks our first year of rule. The city flourishes more than ever it would have with the o..

Chapter 3--Dunmore “Lord Seryth.” A guard said. “What is it?” Seryth asked. “A harpy wishes to s..

Chapter 4--Metamorphosis Zander awoke in the middle of the night thinking of Astrithr. “What is happening to us? Blanc doesn..

This chapter isnt quite finished but still appreciate feedback