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this doesn't flow so wonderfully, advice would be very much appreciated.

Taking in that spicy smoke I inhale, then cough As the harsh fumes leave me Brushed away by the wind The sky is blue in white clouds Cooled f..

She grasps the hands of the dead Pale, cold, unresponsive fingers and palms Twined, joined with her own Place kisses on frigid knuckles Warm ..

I can see it, the way her hand glides Over used turntables In a room of old and new equipment Seen better days The brush and paint As black..

deals with death

for the dog Tachi

Stare down at me with love Let your light pierce this heart Guiding not only fingertips on broken keyboards But spirit and soul to Paths once ..

She raises a Goddess in the stars Glowing behind the murky clouds Of indigo dye black in the night She shines above the rims of human life Hal..

This pure beauty rising, She demands the eyes of cold blue skies Her light turning away from the Full kiss of lips Still illuminating the world ..

I’m waiting for the beauty of life to kick in Dancing in the illumination of moonlight As she floods the world In the pureness of existe..