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A Story by Caitlin

Soft, Calm, Light

A Poem by Caitlin

A Trip to the Heart

A Poem by Caitlin

You Blind Her

A Poem by Caitlin

We Used to be Close

About Me

Caitlin is fine; September 14th, 14 years ago; Freshman; One brother; Single and crushing; Poems; Quotes; Friends; Books; Guys; Summer; Beach; Sunglasses; Volleyball;

Kassidy Carleen; Amy Jane; Katelen Marie; Andrew James; Casie Rae; Alyssa Rae; Kaitlyn Heather; Tara Lynn; Jessie Lynn; Sean S; Jymmie Marshall; Chris John;
LC Volleyball Team 2010♥
THE BEST ♥

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kij143

Posted 14 Years Ago

Hey Caitlin, I have some words of advice that I think would help with your writing.
I think your writing would be a lot better if you had something to write about. I mean, if you write about something that's personal and you can connect a lot with. Something that you feel strongly about,those are yours-any writers best poem. Your writing is fantastic, but i personally think it lacks a little passion, if I were you, I would try and write about something that inspires you, Love, anger, the ectasy of greif and loss, reflection, whim, wit, and happiness. Try and write about something thats bothering you, something thats on your mind, soemone you care about, something you feel strongly about to try and give your poems and other peices of writing more passion, more depth, something that people can feel like they relate to-write from your heart.(:
~Kijit<3

Micheal Teal

Posted 14 Years Ago

Be a Unique Light in the World by making every Breath Divine and every moment a Celebration of Life and Love. Live your Higher Self for by doing so you Manifest and Create Miracles. Love is the Essence of what you are and Life is the Opportunity to Share that Essence. By Being the Love that you are, you Nourish your Soul with Joy. You are Unique, You are Light, You are Spirit, You are Love!

- Micheal Teal

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