noteverythingisperfect

Posted 14 Years Ago

I love you! <3

Posted 14 Years Ago

haha its okay i really apprecitate it. thanks :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

How it is:-

Well, this poem is to reveal all of mine.
I'm tired of trying to cover something up with what is fake.

How it could be:-

Well, this poem is to reveal all of mine
I'm tired of trying to cover something up with what is fake

That's what I meant by the full stops, you tend to not use them in poems. Grammaticality speaking that is.

As for the advice on what to change, some people like suggestions like that only sent to them in messages or to have the suggestions removed once applied. Thought I'd find out.

Posted 14 Years Ago

no you dont have to remove it... why? and what do you mean "fulll stops"?

Posted 14 Years Ago

Thanks for taking my advice. Let me know if you want me to edit my review to remove it. I also left out that you should consider not having full stops. Most poems don't but if you believe they are needed no worries.

Posted 14 Years Ago

of course! i enjoy many different kinds of pieces! i will always be happy to! and thank you! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

No worries :)

Advise is easy to give, taking it on-board and making the most of it that's the tough part.

And thanks for reviewing my writing, hope you enjoy all my works just as much as Inside My Head, if you do or if you don't I'd still find it awesome to have you write a review on anything of mine you read. I'll do the same for anything of yours I read.

:)

Posted 14 Years Ago

i had many poems off of that, and i just felt that they wernt up to my standard... otherwise obviously they would be there... but thank you veryyy much for the advise! i have one going at the moment and should be up soon enough! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

"i am undecided with who i am.. life is a long journey that takes misleading turns and you never know where you may end up.. i guess i am just another individual on a path that leads to an unknown space.."

That on it's own should be enough to inspire you to write, if you can't be inspired by you than find someone or something you are passionate about. Writers block happens to everyone, you will be able to beat it, just a matter of either learning to relax and let it flow or working hard to get it going again.

Posted 14 Years Ago

okay thanks a ton :)