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I wrote this, then had trouble reading what I had written

Very depressing. Written a long time ago

I have a temper, and sometimes that is shown in my writing.

This is a short little work of fiction I wrote one night when I was just bored in my room.

The first stanza was stuck in my head for a long time before this poem was born. And yes, it is pretty depressing.

I have had 3 people tell me they really like this one. But I feel like it needs work... 7/17/11

I think this is pretty powerful.. 3/17/11

Not sure when I wrote this

Another old status poem

Again from December 2009 I will add that these were written in the same night.