ali

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you for the read!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you for the thoughtful review. I did not mean for flesh and perfect to have the same vowel, which I know most would not admit to but I love it when things "accidentally" come together as such. Like when people in every day life accidentally rhyme...it thrills me every time. I swear I didn't mean to do that : )

Btw, that relationship did not end in always. He is afraid of that word too.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you. I think subtlety is only found in my writing. I lack it in every day life. which I prefer.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you Ali, for coming back and showing me what you saw; when my head clears a bit I will delve into what you have suggested. I can see that those words are kind of cliché, but that is how one feels, or at least that is how I felt at the time. Wow, it is hard to stay original, isn't it? .lol. Thank you again!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and review Ali! Let me know what lines you are thinking about? I am always up to hearing advice from a fellow writer. Really thank you for the taking the time!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ha ha, no worries, I have a trucker's mouth as well. lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review, and the great catch on the spelling...I appreciate the constructive review...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Well I used to in my younger day. lol. Not something I am proud of, but figured it would give your piece more authenticity, so I decided to share:) You are a very good writer, and I enjoy what I have seen of your writes; Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago

you should..your s**t owns...
for really real

Posted 13 Years Ago

take yer time dear, I just have more free time on my hands than most. Always apleasure reviewing your stuff.

HA. i laughed when I wrote it actually. Saying, gee what a silly goose I am