I'm unpublished and stereotypical, hoping to one day become a novelist. I'm currently nearly finished with a novel, which hopefully I'll be able to get published. I've been reading my entire life and writing since I've had something to say, so that makes a good number of years in poetry and short stories, and I suppose some day it will have been an even greater number in novels. I thought it would be a good idea to get some of my work out there to see what others think of it, so please leave any comments you want. If you feel I suck, then say so and I will fix after a mere twenty minutes of emasculating sobbing (just kidding-seriously, be honest). I'm unfortunately conflicted in the facts that writing is my passion yet I hate cliches. But anyways, thank you to anyone who spent their time reading this and write, read live, inspire.
Ever think about the snapshots of life which take away the beats within? Fragmented memories. I'd like to see you come up with something about that. You down?
Sure! Don't hesitate to drop a read request for which ever stories/poems you'd like me to review. I like coming in to work in the mornings to a few read requests. Send me as many as you like. Thanks for the reviews also!
Hm, thanks for the review. Now that I think about it, you're right about the "nightmare". Even though it's 'torture', it's something that she would gladly endure....The end is kind of where it started falling apart for me, anyway, so hopefully tweaking a few sentences and lengthening the conclusion will help.
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