Leelun

Leelun

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Meh, maybe it was just too much inspiration going on, and not enough structure. lol Basically I was thinking about all my long distance friends. I never get to see them, and for the both of them, we did not part well....

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you for stopping by the WriteOff challenge and voting.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


thanks for the review and, you're right the ending was rushed...mainly because I didn't want it to go on any longer and I didn't know how to end it...haha...
Thanks!

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Posted 17 Years Ago

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you! *bows* But personally I like the last two verses. *shrugs* Oh well...

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Uhh...i accidently left the last one blank. But Yeah, I felt that the poem should be longer, but I didn't know what else to say. I guess it does have a little wanting for something more personal. *shrugs*

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Yeah, I had a little trouble ending it. Exactly which verse was it that didn't flow?

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanx fot the review of UNTITLED. Your words make me smile.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Hello dear Sam, welcome to the cafe.
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