Zach Is Speaking Again

Zach Is Speaking Again

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I'm young, and I can't see the future.- What I know, is only that knowledge is lacking in me, to such a point, that I can't express enough of what I've experienced without putting it in these poems. And this is a reason I write.

I enjoy your criticism, even your crude reactions-----I'm only here to bounce my poetry off of you. Feel free to send me poems you'd like me to read; I'll do my best to review them.

I probably won't respond to you if you ask me to explain the experience behind the poem; but never say never, they say.

-I don't want to get a straight job.
too much work.
I should just be a hippy and smoke weed
--- and rake together money from poetry readings and stocking shelves -at a locally owned bookshop
-and forget the world exists.
-lose all sense of geography.
Until eventually I set off on a quest to hitchhike to Pakistan to see Mecca
---and I'll dedicate my life to this goal.
and when they end up dropping me somewhere in Nova Scotia, and I ask some Mountie which way's Pakistan
and he tells me about the ocean
and Mecca's in Saudi Arabia.....
then I will just shoot myself and die.


"Ah! Wherefore with infection should he live,
And with his presence grace impiety,
That sin by him advantage should achieve,
And lace itself with his society?
Why should false painting imitate his cheek,
And steal dead seeing of his living hue?
Why should poor beauty indirectly seek
Roses of shadow, since his rose his true?
Why should he live now Nature bankrupt is,
Beggar'd of blood to blush through lively veins?
For she hath no exchequer now but his,
And, proud of many, lives upon his gains.
O, him she stores, to show what wealth she had
In days long since, before these last so bad."

--William Shakespeare


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Posted 17 Years Ago


I'll se if I get arond to reading some of your stuff tomorrow. I'm lazy at the moment and the sleep is kicking in.
I must say just getting a straight job is pretty boring.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


just been reading through some of yr stuff randomly- it's really different! i don't mean different like "i'm-trying-to-think-of -something-nice-to-say", i mean -really got my attention FOR REAL different. liking it.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


i appreciate the challenge to enhance my poem with ambition... though i tend to leave behind, more so than drag along

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Albino Deer

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Albino Deers

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Posted 17 Years Ago


That was lovely. Thank you for sharing it with me :)


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Posted 17 Years Ago


Poetryfoundation.org

go to the podcasts and listen to 3/15/07 Peter Pereira "Her Name is Rose"

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Posted 17 Years Ago


HAPPY B-DAY!!!

*smiles*

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I completely understand feeling of lack of connectedness. Look me up on myspace... I think we'd hit it off great there. Don't worry... I'm in full color there too.

Rebecca

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I printed it, so I can spend some time with it. I'll give you some words soon.