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Slowly working my way through revisions of my book of poems.

Old shows and old aches

Work in progress, maybe, but yes, they all are. Now retitled and one line removed.

A significant revision of this poem.

Completely re-worked and edited.

Revisited, revised, reposted

Revised primarily the ending. Pequod is the name of the unfortunate ship captained by Ahab in Moby Dick. As long as we're on the sea theme...

At least it is short.

Something about Troy.

Another revision.