Valorie Lauter

A warm hello to everyone!! I start to write when the world weighs heavy on my shoulders...it's a great release and keeps me out of my head lol. I feel that my writings are weak and would like your opinion and guidance on sentence stucture, grammer, ect... I would like to thank everyone in advance for taking the time to read my writes.
"May all your days be filled with much love, sunshine and butterflies"
Peace =^-^=