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This poem turned out pretty good, You can look at it as either the writer is having the time of his life currently, or that the best thing in his life..
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This is a complete remake of a past poem. It is much better but there are a few parts I still feel are a bit awkward to read.
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This one if hard for me, This is about the hardest year of my life and I feel I owe a perfect poem to these three. I have reworked this poem countless..
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I feel his one just might be trying too hard
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I feel this poem needs some work, maybe a whole restructuring, but I like some aspects of it, although I'm being told not to change it so maybe I'm ju..
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This poem I feel has a lot of promise, yet I feel needs work, any help will be appreciated
and those last three lines are pretty killer I must say!
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One of my personal favs
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My other gem, A poem I really like and have gotten real positive feedback on
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This is my favorite Poem I have written, I wrote this my Sophomore year of High School and have sense reworked it multiple times.
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