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Please critique my work

Please critique my work!

Critique my work please :)

Please critique my work :)

Critique my work please!!

Really need help on this one!

“Grandma! Hurry up, imma be late if you don’t hurry up.” I was running down the stairs skipping every third step to get to the doo..

I wasn’t sure what I was going to be yet, but I was positive whatever career it was I chose would be a good one. Selia was already at the fr..

I frowned, I hadn’t realized I had grabbed banana and strawberry and sat it back down grabbing my banana. I observed the others who had come..

The rest of the class was a review of what we “should have learned” last year and a small homework assignment. I wanted to smack the c..