Tim Burr

Posted 17 Years Ago

hey what's up. nmh. sry i know you don't know me, but will you please read my poem "Painkillers" please and thank you

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :-)

I appreciate you took time to read it and give your opinion.
I would love if you would deepen a little more what you said about metaphors, I'm not sure I understood it correctly. (I am after all not speaking English fluently LOL)
I think I do understand what you mean, but would be glad if you still could explain it more deeply.
I may not agree with you, but it is always nice to understand other peoples true opinion :-)
I am glad to receive honest reviews, this will make me able to develope.

Thanks again

Best

Maria

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hi

I have added you at my list (it is at my profile), with work I wish to read and review.
It may take some time as there are many writers.
Please be patient for I will get to your work too.
Thank you for reviewing my work :-)

All the best

Maria

Posted 17 Years Ago

i DO say so...

<3 Nicole

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thank-you so much for the review, and I would review all of your poems, but the problem is they are ALL amazing, so I thought a comment stating that would do just as well.

-Nicole

Posted 17 Years Ago

hey, just wanted to thank you for the review :]

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks so much for the review, tim! ever since i wrote a short story in high school and a classmate interpreted it in a way i hadn't even thought of, i've been fascinated with the way the written word can have different meanings for different people. i wrote that one about my daughter.

Posted 17 Years Ago

I like your work :) Keep it up. Good stuff.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Just keep your pen moving, you'll find it.