Thanks for the review, Goff. Yay, someone is reading it, and I'm glad you're liking it.
For the record, I hadn't thought about what I was doing with Dimitri in Chp.1, and I do indeed need to go fix that. The transition between the prologue and the story are supposed to be slightly disjointed like they are, so I know it's odd, but it's there on purpose. Also, the Executioner I think you were referring to is the name of the comic store Robert works in (which I'm pretty sure I explain later, but I'll have to check).
Anyway, thanks for the context review, I appreciate it.
btw. responding to your review: are you "confused" about his motives? or are you eager to learn what they are? something to consider for yourself. reading is experiencing. experience it.
uh woops wrong button :P
Hey, when are you going to send the story link? You wanted us to write a story over the break, about some topic, and idk what the topic is... If you need my e-mail, I'll send you a message, like on Myspace, or something...
But, ya, that'd be great to get, whenever possible. I hope you're having a good break, take care and I'll see ya when we get back!
-Nate
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