i hate to report that Comatose has bogged me down. there are several places where the scene transition gets very confusing, and this definitely feels like a first draft :/ i'll get it to you sooner or later, that I promise!
not a problem. it's another "experiment" piece that I did a long time ago, so who knows how you'll take to it :P
i've started critiquing Comatose... i'm putting my edits right into the document, so you'll get it back in a file either tomorrow or friday. cya tomorrow!
ahaha... i've lost two computers since i wrote that "POV from insane man" story, but after 45 minutes of deep searching, i found it hidden away in the archives of my emails!
so i'm going to add it as Threads. if you really enjoy my writing, then you should have enough for a long while cause i just added a new humor short story :P
but I definitely say take a look at Threads in the next week and see how I took on the "insane man murders someone" theme.
my name is Ian, by the way. i live in NC, and haven't really been to Cali much. last time I went was christmas of '08, to Berkeley (which is a city I fell deeply in love with). are you in North or South CA?
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