Dear Steven, This was a fabulous poem. I've put out read requests to a number of my friends who I think will also like your poem very much. My very best to you, my friend. -Rick
Will take a peep at yours in a mo. I'm in re-post mode at the moment. I think the only one that has a bit of emo and a broader msg is ...READY OR NOT! I was some 3 teens playing hide n seek in a small St.Albans park a year back. They were sort of not street wise city teens yet no longer children. And it seemed we are all of us in a bigger game of hide n seek with life.