Melissa A. Bergin

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About Me

Poetry is my art. Words are a medium through which I portray enlightening truths, dazzling phrases and heart-wrenching realities. We (poets) are the truth seeking souls, cleverly crafting our vision of the world through a perfectionists arrangement of similes and metaphors, assonance and alliteration,
enjambments
and end-stops.

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Keith

Posted 17 Years Ago

Merci, appreciations extended for your time and interest. That one was pretty old and revision is rather redundant for it at this stage, but thanks, perspective...

Artemisia

Posted 17 Years Ago

"thanks" for the dying in a hospital bed?! comment... i think you've really missed the point of my poem if the imagery that came into your mind was death.....

Kimberly Rae

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing!! i appreciate your comments. i'll definitely keep that little tip in mind. thanks again! :]

Lewis Tedesco

Posted 17 Years Ago

hey, thanks for the review of my poem. Yea, I know that something is missing, I am putting them out there for initial feedback with the intention of going back and changing some stuff around. I am glad that you like it. May I suggested reading "I will love you...always"? I will review your stuff, thanks again.

Roy L. Pickering Jr.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Welcome to the Cafe, Melissa.

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