Ooooh, thank you for being constructive, I'm always looking to improve, and I believe soon I will be going to fix that line :) When I first wrote it I thought the same thing, but I rushed I guess xP
Thank you! <3
Oh, no need, allowing your lovely poetry to be read is enough, and you've reviewed me plenty of times, that I appreciate :) But of course if you'd like to go ahead haha x)
I'm so glad my poem did that for you! Really, it means a lot to hear that it actually affected someone :) Cheer up, things will improve <3 Good luck and good day :)