Sarrie Lynne

Posted 17 Years Ago

No problem, I like to review, it's just a matter of putting aside enough time to do it. Would love to read some more of your stuff, it's been a while. :) Might check it out now.
- M

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it a lot :) Any feedback I can get is well appreciated and my poem was supposed to be written as more of a rant anyways ;)

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the add!!!:)

Posted 17 Years Ago

Posted 18 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing "The Smelling of Lilac". I agree there needs to be more history of the Flower Girls. I haven't thought about who Lillian's mother and grandmother are, I'll have to think about that. I appreciate your comments, thanks.

Posted 18 Years Ago

so i started to read it and i realized that there were a ton to typos, and the likes i know must go. and now that i read your comments i realized how not done i am, but at least the concept is finished
the thing was is that it wasnt supposed to be about highschool to college. it was the life that was behind it. i was fine with going to school and getting the grades, it was the personal behind it. i worte about the hard things for me. i thank you for the things that need a back story. when we get back you can tell me what you need to know to understand the parts, that would help a lot.

love you gus gus
bill

Posted 18 Years Ago

hey buddy gues what i did, i finishe LIFE so go check it out. it needs to be edited but the rough daft should be ok for you to understand

got ta go
love ya
bill

Posted 18 Years Ago

Thanks for the review of my story!

Posted 18 Years Ago

Thanx for the add. I hope to read more comments from you in the future, and I plan to spend alot of time reading your work as will. Thanks again.

Posted 18 Years Ago

thanks chica, i just got back from lunch with kristina. we miss you mucho. how are you.

love you gus gus

always
your bill