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I sit here on this dark winters night and tremor as I become more engulfed in my fright a tear streaks my cheek and I scream for the release I seek..

The Vampire, Cloaked in darkness, clad in velvet shadows. The Vampire, like a cold wind; sending your spine tingling. The Vampire, l..

Kinda dark. Im aware it needs alot of work, but im stumped as to what exactly it needs. Please help by giveing any ideas or oppinions you have.

Rip out my heart and leave a gapping hole, stab at my sanity and tear out my soul. Kiss my cheek and smile big, Whisper "I hate you" a..

First part is writen by myself. Second part is written by a dear freind of mine :) Feel free to constructively critisize it to the death.

Please bash and give ANY ideas or thoughts you have.

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