Jamie-Leigh

Um....well...where should I start? Erm...I'm a very young-so young I'm not even out of middle school-, petite female who...really loves to write, I'm in an experimental stage of writing a vampire story, that is NOT based off of Twilight, I just happen to be fond of the race of creatures. I WILL post the first part of my story on here, and hope for some ideas and support, not to mention much needed critique. I-for some reason unfathomable beyond my knowing- am able to use detail, even though I have a high case of hemophobia(fear of blood) which I find ironic in the case of Vampires(or in my story spelt "Vampyres" or sometimes "Vampires", it varies at times. )I realize I'm rambling, and most of you have already stopped reading this but...I hope to really get some much needed help on my story, which is titled "Red Temptations", hence my user name...and yes, I know I have awesome hair.