Rartemass

Posted 14 Years Ago

Thank you against for your review. I made the short story to see how people liked the idea... It isn't perfect and I guess I should have added that paragraph that explained the change in writing.

Also Violet wasn't much for blood... she just does it for the satisfaction of killing... So when he wasn't get she bit his neck just to finish him, it wasn't a getting all the blood kind of thing.

I see what you mean, but I wasn't exactly trying to make it perfect in a way I want people to ask those questions and figure them out when and if I decide to make this a novel... About the errors. I am dyslexic... which no I don' t want to say it gives me a right to miss words... If you could umm tell what the errors are exactly it would help more then just saying there are errors...

Posted 14 Years Ago

I've been writing inconsistantly for about 7 years and have several novels and short stories in various stages of development.

I'm looking forward to getting feedback on them.