Pamela Sue

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for your review. I found your comments to be accurate and insightful. Alex H.

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for popping in and sharing your thoughts... c ya

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Pamela Sue. I save all my work on a flash drive now. I used to put it in the bottom of a trunk. Whenever I would clean my room I would go through and be like, oh I remember that one.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Pamela,
Nice cinquain (s) (love the 3 in 1) and it is not often a girl is honored in such a way. As Matthew said, you do well grasshopper.

Posted 17 Years Ago

you and me both. LOL

Posted 17 Years Ago

Actually the "he" I refered to was my heart. And I wrote this as an outsider perspective. I never was married, I never cheated on a woman, and I don't drink. But thank you for the great reviews you've given me. The line you used in your review, "portrayal of betrayal", I love it and I actually used in in a spoken word piece I wrote a while back.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Pamela Sue,
Thank you for reading Pelt. How kind your review. My other cinquains--I will put up soon, have a couple of bumps to work out. Thank you again, I really appreciate it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Well thank you so much for reviewing. I love Abby's work and it is my pleasure to review. Sometimes I have to read a few times before giving a review so please keep sending me stuff. I will always read it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review of Shopping, and welcome to the Cafe.
~Vallerie