about 6 minutes to midnight here
This as I've promised was my last day here
Farewell now and bye
See you next time after I improve and improve inshallah
Peace!
I would not want to burden with you with a read request, but I sent Faithless Devotion because the poem is not offensive to religion. In essence, it is about an emotional response to love, but first, I will allow to pursue it optionally for your own interpretation. I only elaborate after the perspective is submitted.
If there is too much on your plate, I, personally, do not mind. I am very grateful for all of your reviews that have been conducted on practically all of them. Also, as a warning, my Book is not finished, and there is only a rough draft that is in poetry format.
HAHA Well, my newfound friend that is leaving, I do not hate you for questioning my ideas. In fact, I welcome them. It shows that you are actually attempting to understand the message, and it would be a falsifying action if you did not question.
haha Oh yes, sorry I did not mean to put Purple Panther. Perhaps, this is why I should sleep during the night:P I meant that in response to Coitus Lotus. I am sorry about that:P At the moment, my mind is barely functioning.
On further note, I am hoping to review as much as your work possible before the time is up.
Thank you for your sincere praise with your review on the Inner Midway:D I will further elaborate on each of the poems you have put your effort into absorbing:D
Thank you kindly for your review on the Purple Panther, but to clarify, the poem is not about myself. As I have said before, I use layered meaning, and therefore, I will delve in separate responses to your reviews. I appreciate your insight, and I respect your open mind with subjects that you do not agree with. The most appealing trait that you compose is you are able to overlook what you do not like, and see something good within the context.