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I haven't quite decided weather or not I like this one... any thoughts/criticism?

Darkness comforts Slow and steady Always waiting Never ready Staying still Barely breathing Holding each other Under the night Finge..

Sun shines outside The air in here is stale Though I hold no expectations You try to stay calm I can't ignore these thoughts It overwhelms ag..

Flame and shadows Flicker softly My mind keeps running Too fast to keep up The wallpaper is peeling The floor is dusty Furniture is long gone ..

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