I found your review helpful. Haha, but obviously -if I was a brilliant writer, why whould I be on here?? I would be publishing and editing things. I love reading and I love writing - to clear my mind. Does that poem sound cheesy? Sure it does! It's a cheesy, "oh sweet delight you are my Lord" kinda thing. It's not supposed to be art, it's supposed to encourage "beliefers" that might get encouraged or blessed by it. Still I find it really cool that you reviewed it. Most writing floating around today is done a certain way and it's the opposite to how I write. Short sentences, litte emotion, facts, cold. I can't describe it well in German, but certain issues or specific subjects simply are not to be seen "in an old fashioned way" hence a Christian one overfloating with cheesy rambeling that makes no sense at all to a nonbeliever and probably also not to most Christian people. It's not about the structure or linguistical things. It's about the message, and according to the world the message indeed sucks. See, I read your stuff and it just leaves me cold, there is nothing you say in there and for me that contains no worth, the greatest writing skills cannot define a poem's worth. It's done in the eyes of the reader. And to some fellow Chrtistians my work might just do that.
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I found your review helpful. Haha, but obviously -if I was a brilliant writer, why whould I be on here?? I would be publishing and editing things. I love reading and I love writing - to clear my mind. Does that poem sound cheesy? Sure it does! It's a cheesy, "oh sweet delight you are my Lord" kinda thing. It's not supposed to be art, it's supposed to encourage "beliefers" that might get encouraged or blessed by it. Still I find it really cool that you reviewed it. Most writing floating around today is done a certain way and it's the opposite to how I write. Short sentences, litte emotion, facts, cold. I can't describe it well in German, but certain issues or specific subjects simply are not to be seen "in an old fashioned way" hence a Christian one overfloating with cheesy rambeling that makes no sense at all to a nonbeliever and probably also not to most Christian people. It's not about the structure or linguistical things. It's about the message, and according to the world the message indeed sucks. See, I read your stuff and it just leaves me cold, there is nothing you say in there and for me that contains no worth, the greatest writing skills cannot define a poem's worth. It's done in the eyes of the reader. And to some fellow Chrtistians my work might just do that.
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lmfao okay, wow, calm down. i'm a defensive "f**k", great. try reviewing my future work with some real "constructive criticism" that has some rhyme behind it's reason and see if I get defensive.
constructive criticism is great by me, that's why i joined this site, but when it's a misinterpretation of a line or doesn't make sense, then it's not of much use is it?
besides, that poem is s**t, it was forced out, i just needed to write it, it's just a ramble of thoughts. i'll be the first to tell you that.
Look James, you fit the description... the fact that you own me is simply written fiction... Your death is in my hands and I will push it if you tempt me, with an AK, AR, or 9 milli... hahahaha.
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