Nansi London : Writing

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Chapter 13...still not much comments, but thankfully some views.
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I would appreciate some reviews please. I'm working hard at this story so how's about a bit of encouragement? Oh and thanks in advance TIM!
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chapter 15! yay!
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I haven't really checked for errors so if you see any...point em out for me. Will start 17 ASAP
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not sure if there are in errors. give me a shout if there are. One more filler chapter then we're back to the action! woot! woot! lol
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took long enough to get this up...but here it is.
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NEXT STOP CHAPTER 20
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21 is where it really begins...and its coming.
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It was late...I was tired and very sleepy. So if you see errors please alert me and I will fix it. This was like 13 pages of typing. I'm sleep...goodn..
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k, I didn't proof this...just wanted it out there. Tell me what you think and point out the boo boos for me.