If you view my chapter, please leave a comment. I'm looking for ways to improve my writing and really, anything will help! I know right now it seems shallow and superficial, but the story will get somewhere. I just have to set up the background of the story and set up the characters. Ultimately, it's a "sexual assault survival story"; it's something very near to my heart, and I really want to make this the best I can! If you have questions, comments, ANYTHING feel free to shoot me a message or comment. Anything will help! Thank you for viewing!!