Marshall=Julius

Hi I'm a 13 year old boy and I don't know why I even said my age or gender but I'm basically just a really bad author but my friends say its good and so does my family, I don't know. I guess thats why I signed up on here, so you guys please don't give me generic statements like "Its really good" or something to that extent, please give me real criticism's or tell me the things I did right so I know to keep on doing them, anyways I hope ya'll have a good day/night.