Thank you!! You are one of two who have read all my chapers :) I also added a lot of descriptive writing to Chapter 2, and added photos :) Maybe you'd care to look at Ch. 2 again and see what you think. Would appreciate it!!
Thnx a lot, Lizbeth
It's tough sometimes to get feedback, though I will say I've really enjoyed what I've read so far of your work! (This is in response to your status ;) )