This is my first chapter of a new type of story. I would like your opinions on if you found it to be believable in regards to emotions? Also this is s..
I wanted to be a little bit more descriptive about the world. Clear up a few things about the characters, maybe make Osiris a little more interesting...
I'm speeding things along, i will add a few more childhood chapters at a later date maybe. Also Skott has more character development. But this is a sc..