J.R Schlievert

If a fun loving person! Need help with anything just give me a message and I promise that I will get to you! Im a big guy at 65 (AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! THAT RHYMED!) and I love people! And what ever they have to say, REVIEW MY WORK! AND ILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!


I’m here telling you about my new story, it's the first two out of the five, and here is a summary
Man finds two burglars trying to break into their house. He doesn't know what to do, so he runs upstairs to his wife. They try to devise a plan to get out of house and called the police. But the burglars find them in pulls a gun on them making sure that they don't go anywhere.
The burglars are holding them hostage, trying to squeeze out all the information about them. As they continue to abuse and insult them continuously. Cindy-the wife-knows the voice of one of the burglars. And the rest you need to read for yourselves.
Here's the first part
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jarin/491764/
And here is the second
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jarin/492525/
Thank you very much
Sincerely,
JR :-)