Jamal

I am a 43 year old man from Texas. I am an Air Force brat. I am married with 4 kids. I do data analysis, and am in failing health. I have decided to give real attention to my writing for the next few years as I am going blind and would like to still be able to provide for my family when I can no longer see. I am looking for honest reviews of my work to hone my skills. Also, I realize I am not Dennis Haybert, but he is so much better looking than I am.