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You know where to dig. You know where to stick your claws in.

I must admit. This one I do find to be quite painful to read just simply because it is so repetitive. Go ahead and check it out at your own risk.

Repetitive, I know. But A WHOLE LOT LESS repetitive than the original. I could post that one too as well.

I've got feelings, you've struck a chord

We degrade. Push until we separate.

I can't reject what is already in my head

A lot of trials. And many battles. To be settled.

I will not be reduced. My worth will not be abused. I will not be duped nor will I stoop to your level

You are the reflection. We suffer the contusion. You are the deception. Discontent with your intrusion

We revolt. We revolt