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First 3 chapters of a book I'm writing, please review and give constructive comments!
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Prologue:
There are
three types of people in this world; Gods, Humans and Demons. To merely stare
at one with the naked eye is not enough to..
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Chapter 1: The final eclipse:
A
miniscule, glimmering, essence of a crimson radiance composed the crust: boldly
shining, circumferencing the..
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Chapter 2:
The Penultimate eclipse
Gradual,
swaying, falling, maroon autumn leaf; last of a rough masterful oak, hung
perpetuated, defying ..
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Chapter 3: The
test of loyalty:
Slowly
lowering, with knobbed fingers the sea of threads under a thin blanket of white
powder, the robed fi..
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The title says it all...
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Inspired by today :D random lil story about a meadow.
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