Hayne&Lilith

Hey guys,we are Hayne and Lilith.we come from a Eastern country,which don't see English as a lingua franca. However,we are desperate in elevating our English. Because of this reason,we decided to write a novel together. It will be our pleasure if you leave us any comment,no matter it's positive or negative. We hope that you can give us your hands, and help us by pointing out the mistakes. We will put our greatest effort on it and try our best in fiction writing. Hope that our English can be improved as time goes by!