It was a great piece. You deserved that review. I'm doing alright thank you, it's good to be back. I've decided not to fret over being the most read or any of that, and go back to the enjoyment of just having my work read, and I'm doing much better. Look forward to hearing from you.
As for the thing with the diologue...can you name any examples? Because from what I see, I thought it could work with the rule that each paragraph is the other character speaking.