Yeh, I know the ending is naff. I'll probably edit at some point. Thing is, I had trouble finding the right ending. I wanted the Statue to Die, but couldn't quite find the right way to do it. But I'll draft some options, so its all good :)
hey esk,
thanks for reviewing my poem, I sincerelly appreciate
your valuable support, as far as the poem goes
its a secret he he, not really but
just a dramatic take on the great chase, love games,
anyhow I appreciate you stopping by,I'm definitely
looking forward to reader more of your talent :)
Hope your night is finding you well.
Hello my friend, how are you? I'm hoping well,
thank you so much for the great review,
I really appreciate your valuable thoughts
I'll be looking forward to reading you as well. :)
I'm gradually making headway with part 5, but like you said, mucho busy.
Dunno about you, but its been dead on here. I'm going to do a new blog-I think you'll find it interesting. Its about fantasy writers Vs. everybody else. Seems the only way to get read and respect is to write fantasy. And it doesn't even have to be well written! It's pissing me off.
Chars for the review. I know that guy (Twilight) from another site and he always gives pretty good reviews. If you want, I'll send you a request to some of his stuff, he's pretty good.