Brittney

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Writing

Letting Go Letting Go

A Poem by Brittney
Fighting Fighting

A Poem by Brittney
Him Him

A Poem by Brittney
So Confused So Confused

A Poem by Brittney
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About Me

I am 16. gong into 11th grade. i love animals. i have two horses, that i like to ride. Well, I have only been writning for about 3 and a half years. I usually only write to take my stress away. but there is one so far i have not written under stress and that is My one and only. i am trying to write not just under stress but also when i am happy.


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Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you! I just read a lot of different poets and that really helps my own writing; showing me what I like and don't like in poems and the most effective ways to write.

I hope my honesty was useful. You never really know how people will take any kind of constructive criticism - it has taken me a while to embrace and take it myself.

Have you tried writing in stanzas? It might solve the presentation problem you were having.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Welcome to the cafe and thanks for taking the time to read my words.
I find it useful being on here as it makes me write to the best of my ability as I know people don't hold back... well there are a few people who give honest reviews anyway. I hope you gain something from it too.
Have a good weekend!
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