Eli

Eli

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I'm back from a long break from here, and I'm a little rusty. I'm taking (hopefully) a new turn in my writing this time around, so enjoy!

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Charleston, SC
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A Poem by Eli


The Young Man The Young Man

A Poem by Eli


Sunday Paper Sunday Paper

A Poem by Eli


Tree's Leaf Tree's Leaf

A Poem by Eli


Autumn Leaves Autumn Leaves

A Poem by Eli


Memorial Day Memorial Day

A Poem by Eli


Winter Escape Winter Escape

A Book by Eli


The Costs of War The Costs of War

A Stage Play by Eli


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About Me

I'm a 17 year old kid who loves writing, photography, reading, mathematics, science, and music!

*IF you review any of my work, please don't just say how good it was. I want strict reviews that can help make me better. PLEASE.


" It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died; instead we should thank god that such men lived." - George S. Patton

"The whole structure of the military is designed to mature young men to function responsibly while at the same time preserving their adolescent sense of invulnerability." -Quote from Generation Kill

"The key to getting through life is knowing that everything works out the way it's meant to be. If it feels like everything is over and there's no hope, it hasn't finished working out yet." -Me

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you. I definitely have had some lags in my writing and there are many I am still not happy with. I appreciate the constructive criticism more than you know!
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Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha, thanks for the picture comment! :D

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Posted 13 Years Ago


I did the think in your status and died laughing.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


I haven't talked to u in like... FOREVER!!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you for the review. I am a republican. Just expressing my disgust for our President. I know that they are all to blame. But did you know when we were in threat of a shut down that had been building up sense last May, Obama didn't get involved until two days before they froze our military pay. It pisses me off so bad. idk.
I think you should read my poem Dear Mr. President.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol love your status!
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Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha, it's okay. Your more of the political :D But thanks for asking anyway! :)
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Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, let's see..I love reading fantasy and young adult. Mostly anything with a strong plot, and something with adventure. :)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


thank you yea i know the start is kinda wierd it started out to be something else

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Posted 13 Years Ago


thank you
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