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Introducing only one of my main characters. There will soon be more.

the second character to enter the city.

the next character to make an entrance.

the final character to enter the city.

just a separation.

Fox's story, continued . . .

Three's story continued.

Sordina's story, continued.

please, please review. I really need some criticism on this.

It's finished now, please comment.