Derrick Crane

Hi my name is Derrick and i am not really that interesting. I attend community college and spend time with my small circle of close friends, pretty average stuff i suppose. I have very intense dreams, and often explore and analyze their meaning. Often i will write down my dream, and play around with it. sometimes a short story comes out the other end. i pretty much just want people to respond to what i write and have them tell me what they think about it. all i want is your constructive criticism. tell me about how it sounded, any stylistic errors? was it boring? did it engage you?. please dont write something thats two or three words along the lines of "it was great" or "it sucks bro". pleases tell me in detail what you think of my stuff. i whole-heartedly appreciate anything you have to say about my work. you wont be hurting my feelings by any means if your reception of it is negative, this isnt my profession, just a hobby.