Thank you sooo much for your review of Guardian's of Garthion: Chapter One. I really appreciated your comments. It brought a smile of gratitude to my face, knowing that my blood-shed efforts accomplished that which I desired...giving the reader a sense of "knowing" the main character. I hope you like chapter two as well.
I turned to the channel and there was the guy playing chess with Death and I was immediately like, "It's the Seventh Seal!" even though i'd never seen it before.
How is something so old better than so many more recent films? You'd think filmmakers would learn from the past and expand on what came before, rather than digress...
I was having a conversation about Dr. Seuss and his writing the other day. I haven't read any Dr.S since I was a kid, but I'm sure he's got some got scansion in his poetry.
I know what you mean though, I was one of those people.
Thank you for reading "Transfiguration", I'm glad it was understandable and enjoyable. :)
Poetry isn't a mystery, or atleast it shouldn't be, it's downright good for the soul. Give it another chance, at the very least, poetry's quicker to read than stories and novels.
Thanks for the comments, D. I'm still working on building up the endurance and stamina required to write an entire story longer than three to five pages before losing interest and moving on. Got the first draft of a fifteen plus pager done over the weekend, though, and when I get more regular access again I'll have to put that up.