Dkincaid

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About Me

DREAM


A man lay on his bed at the end of his life. His dream came to pay his last respects and bid him farewell. And as it entered the room the man looked down in shame.

Why didnt you realize me? asked the dream.

Because I was afraid, the man said.

Afraid of what? asked the dream.

Afraid I would fail.

But havent you failed by not attempting to realise me?

Yes I have. said the man. But I always thought there was tomorrow.

You Fool! said the dream, Didnt it ever occur to you that theres only ever today? And now that deaths here, can you put it off until tomorrow?

No. said the man, a tear gently rolling down his cheek.

The dream was softer now. Because it knew that there were two types of pain. The pain of discipline and the pain of regret. And while discipline weighs ounces, the weight of regret is unbearable.

Then the dream leaned forward to gently wipe away the tear and said: You only had to take the first step. And I would have taken one to meet you. For the only thing that separated us was your belief that you couldnt have me. I yearned and longed for you to realise me during our short existence together!

And with that, they said goodbye and they both died

Mark Baker

Writing is a way to feed your Dreams.



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Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm so glad you liked one of my newer pieces. just putting some back that got erased...don't have time to sit and do too many at a time. I always appreciate your reviews. You are too kind!

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Posted 17 Years Ago


LOVE 'Sleeping with ghosts"!!!! [smiles]

And you're welcome in return!

Skye

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Posted 17 Years Ago


However flattering my review may be, the poem (The Gain of Loss) is a Brilliant write that shows your fantastic artistry. I have linked it on my "Wall of Moments" on my profile and hope this is ok with you.

Thank you for your capture of moments!

Skye

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Congrats. You are the featured writer this week At Poets Corner. Take care and God Bless.
Debby

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Posted 17 Years Ago


you're right, it was more of a rant for me, wrote in just a few minutes.
just getting out some ideas. sorry if you didn't like it

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Yea that me forever the optimist. I Thank you for your kind words and review.
Take care and God Bless.
Debby

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Posted 17 Years Ago


No problem, we all have bad days and all so don't trip but I do hope that whatever the problem was It's better now. If not I will keep you in prayer. Take care and be Blessed.
Debby

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I realize that you wrote it for a friend. All I was saying is it was written to someone who in some way touched you with words or deeds not that you knew them I have never met a lot of the people on this site who have touched me in some way. that is all I meant. Take care and be Blessed.
Debby

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you for your kind words and review always appreciated Blessings.
Debby

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Posted 17 Years Ago


awwwwwww thanks for your comment. so sweet! yes I love it here! : )