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I miss her..........

Something about this feels awkward, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Perhaps the last couple of lines......I wasn't totally thrilled with them.

The fingers trace teasing lines on tender skin; a slight gasp escapes as a deeper arousal begins. A gaze deep into the eyes that stare back at me;..

A cheesy song, written many years ago. Thought I'd throw it at the wall and see if it sticks. :)

A word. A single word..... the simplest of phrases; "Yes". No more words were needed. The eyes told all for both. The wait, the antic..

A broken mind dreams hopeless scenes...... Dancing at the edge of the shadows. The empty soul in darkness screams...... Dancing at the edge of in..

I lie asleep, dreaming...... Imagining...... Wishing...... Wings to fly, or magic. Eyes to truly see, or warmth. Sounds of sweet comfort,..