Kara Rae Garland

Kara Rae Garland

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Portland, OR
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Don't give me hugs and kisses, be harsh, be brutal, shake me up. Tell me what you really think, tell me what parts of my work make you feel uncertain. Tell me which parts really make you sick to your stomach.

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Posted 17 Years Ago



It's been a long time... how are you?
...I've been writing in my sleep...


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...Natanya...

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Posted 17 Years Ago


wow you're totally right.

that was so rude of him to bring it up like that, and he was just being ignorant. the beauty of poetry is using words, sometimes in ways unexpected or uncommon. people need to open their minds :P lol

hugs. i appreciated you linking me to that.

:)

<3kara

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you so much Kara for your review. I am glad you liked my poem. I think that is good you could use your love for nectorines and write such a passionate ans sensual poem. And you are right...something about fruit almost seem sinful. I know I blush when I eat strawberries or a banana. lol.-Catrina

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Posted 17 Years Ago


hello lady kara rae, i hope you have a very happy valentine's day

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I couldn't get your friend invite to go through - then, when I came here to add ya- you don't have an add to friends option - so, send again and let's see if we can make this work ;-)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


O, you are so sweet, dear kara, thx for reviewing so benevolent my IMAGINATION ALIVE!

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you so much, Kara - Leah

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. I guess its poetry, its kinda like a story though. both. thanks anyway, im glad some people like it.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I know how you feel. Some things can't have things said of them once you've read them.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review - I will consider changing "chap" I pictured cowboys in chaps sort of as a play on words.

When a person is suffering from a hangover there is an old saying:
bite the hair or the dog that bit ya - the next day - so if it was whiskey take a swig in the morning to help with hangover - that is where the last line idea came from.

Anyway- I do really appreciate your review - it is nice to meet you - I'm Leah and I look forward to reading your work as well.